Monday, August 31, 2009

My Mental Journey [Day- 1]

A joke broke out into the thick humid air that was so heavily lightened that the fog in it was merely visible for the naked eye very close to it.


There was laughter. Then, there was more, all at once, with mouths wide open, each displaying the age-old primitive tools struck up their red bumpy fleshy fields.

The seemingly thinner taller man at the right corner of the Carom table slipped out his upper lateral incisor tinged with yellow like Gold. Next to him sat a plump seemingly shorter man who seemed curious about the carats but continued to laugh along to please the tall, visibly making efforts to pull down his lips to curtain his Tobacco- stained doorway.

Opposite to them sat their company who chuckled for what so reason unknown to them selves. The doctor stood by the doorway, silently watching them and from the angle of his mouth crawled out a smile that on trying to reenter through the cheeks produced a dimple.

They all looked to be enjoying their each own lil’ game.

Above them, overhanging the primeval wall, the once polished shiny chunk of wood now rendered a granular texture with fresh layers of dust stood as a blind witness unbiased and unread.

‘THE PSYCIATRIC WARD’, it read.

7 comments:

The Guild said...

love ur blog!
Keep writing:)

Arjun

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rwindak said...

hey roomie...dat was a touching description buddy...good job!!

Raviteja said...

That comin' from Suri himself; jus' love that! Thanks!

Raviteja said...

I m soo glad to be read from the AC hostel ;p
Thanks roomY!

Buzz said...

Dude, it's fun to be a doctor! I would like to be one someday - PhD wala hi sahi!

Raviteja said...

VEry clever, Harsh, very!

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